Road Accident
Road AccidentI didnt see it, but heard itor heard of itjust out of sightdown the roadthat cuts like steelbetween green fields.I saw angry police hunting, stopping cars, roaming through the...
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Dave...This gave me goose bumps and teary eyes.How you draw the reader in...hook and hold with your excellent use of imagery.so sad and so often too true.well done.Sue******************To have great...
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///a true storyteller's poem.you have a fine handle on final stanzas.fine post.Be Well.neil.
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Davie,You amaze me. This is so sad, but so evocative and beautifully written. I can only echo the comments of Heartsong and Neil. Eva Olson - Imagination is more important than knowledge...Albert...
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Sue, Neil and Eva - thanks for commenting. I'm glad it hit home; it seemed to symbolise a malaise in society that I've grown increasingly aware of over the years - not, I think just because I'm...
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All too close to home too, what with the recent accident on the bypass that is only a few miles from where you and I live...great narrative thread in this one...a sad subject handled with dignity and...
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It is the briefest moments that so profoundly remind us how precious life is. I think we all ask those questions when tragedy happens, unfortunately it seems the answers haunt us for eternity. You...
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Thank you Paul and Paul, for your kind comments. This happened almost exactly as I described - an appalling accident caused by a couple of kids racing on a country road. The youngest racer was 16!!Davie
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This one hits to close for comfort...excellent 'sit up and take note' piece.Dinah
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